Tomorrow Finally Came
I used to write poetry quite often but not so much these days. Here is one from a long time back I found, so just thought I would share it! Hope you enjoy...
I always thought no matter what bad came
I could always hang on until tomorrow
I saw the good and ignored the bad
It would all be better tomorrow
Holding on to I don't know what
Afraid of what I'd be like on my own
I had to hang on until tomorrow
Don't feel today
Don't see what on it's way
Just hang on until tomorrow
Enjoying the moment and clinging tightly to that joy
Afraid if I closed my eyes it would be gone
Living inside of the dream
Afraid to wake when it would be...tomorrow
Tomorrow finally came...
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Comments
Kasman wrote on July 11, 2014, 8:06 PM
Hopefully all your tomorrows will be as creative as the day you wrote this poem!
JanetHunt wrote on July 11, 2014, 8:07 PM
Kasman Thank you very much! That's so nice of you to say! :)
bestwriter wrote on July 11, 2014, 8:15 PM
You compose well. You reminded me of what we used to sing when we were in school. http://www.oremus.org/hymnal/l/l264.html
Anja wrote on July 11, 2014, 9:07 PM
It is hard to hang on and hope for tomorrow sometimes, your poem speaks of hope and strength.
JanetHunt wrote on July 11, 2014, 9:40 PM
bestwriter Thank you very much! I will check out your link! :)
JanetHunt wrote on July 11, 2014, 9:40 PM
Anja Thank you, yes sometimes that is all we have!
AngelSharum wrote on July 11, 2014, 11:31 PM
That was nice but somehow sad.
JanetHunt wrote on July 12, 2014, 12:18 AM
AngelSharum Thanks! Yes, I get in those moods sometimes...
AliCanary wrote on July 12, 2014, 2:12 AM
But now it's today! :D
midastouch wrote on July 12, 2014, 2:52 AM
surely we all hope for tomorrow while forgetting to live today
and so when tomorrow finally comes
it will still meet us waiting for its brother
lol
paradise1897 wrote on July 12, 2014, 8:39 AM
Very cool poem. I think everyone feels this way every now and then.
CoralLevang wrote on July 12, 2014, 12:45 PM
This made me want to start singing...
"Tomorrow! Tomorrow! I love you, Tomorrow! You're only a day away!"
JanetHunt wrote on July 12, 2014, 6:47 PM
&AbbyG LOL! That song is stuck in my head now. Thanks! ;)
JanetHunt wrote on July 12, 2014, 9:12 PM
&CarolLevang You and &AbbyG had the same idea! LOL! Oh well, at least I have you guys singing! ;)
JanetHunt wrote on July 12, 2014, 9:12 PM
CoralLevang Oops, messed up the tag!
JanetHunt wrote on July 12, 2014, 9:14 PM
paradise1897 Thank you! Poetry can help express all kinds of feelings we have. At least, that's what I find. :)
JanetHunt wrote on July 12, 2014, 9:14 PM
AliCanary Yes, indeed it is! Hope you're having a great weekend!
JanetHunt wrote on July 12, 2014, 9:15 PM
midastouch LOL! Thank you! Great thoughts. Thank you for reading! :)
Ellis wrote on July 13, 2014, 10:38 AM
Nice poem. Hope you have many more tomorrows but enjoy today first..