Book Review: RHODA: AMNESIA: The Demons' Queen (Fantasy adventure series Book 1)
I love to read, and I'll read almost anything except horror. That's why I was so thrilled when I got my first tablet and learned about all the free books online. Now instead of carrying one or two bulky books, I can carry an entire library.
That said, some free books, usually self-published, are painful to read. RHODA: AMNESIA: The Demons' Queen (Fantasy adventure series Book 1) falls into this category.
The story line is good, even unique, but it is painful to read because of changes in tense within sentences and awkward phrasing. I find myself editing the book in my mind, which makes it difficult to enjoy the story. So much so that I emailed the author with an offer to edit it for free. I hope it doesn't seem too forward or egotistic.
Comments
Anja wrote on June 12, 2014, 3:18 PM
A lot of e-books are like that, even the ones people are charging for.
Mysgeek wrote on June 12, 2014, 11:06 PM
This same author has a number of books for sale as well.